To be free
It’s a common wish
But truth be told, how free are we?
Whether it’s by the state, our parents or just someone
Everyone is owned by something
Freedom is a wonderful concept
But it doesn’t exist
To be free It’s a common wish But truth be told, how free are we? Whether it’s by the state, our parents or just someone Everyone is owned by something Freedom is a wonderful concept But it doesn’t exist |
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well... are you allowed to do whatever you want, whenever you want?
No? didn't think so XD there is always something, someone that's stopping us  this is another one of the poems that I wrote during the trip this weekend... I hate travelling far in cars... especially when my ipod's battery AND my cellphone's battery has run out, and the thing that's surrounding me is my 3-year-old sister's child songs *shudder* that, combined with nausea, was a huge part of this weekend *shudder* oh well... at least I've shopped a LOT and spent time with 2 friends that I hadn't seen in a long time, and I've written a lot XD |
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Albus Dumbledore is Gay....Siriusly!!!!......XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd
hmm... I'm not 100% fluent in english (I'm Swedish
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Just being me.. so live with it!
My gallery want's you..
"Things I am not allowed to do at hogwarts: I am not allowed to lock harry and draco in a closet to se if hot gaysex would accure.. cause we all know it would.."
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"Is sloppiness in speech caused by ignorance or apathy? I don't know, and I don't care." -William Safire.
I rage against my username. :iconnotimpressedplz:
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Just being me.. so live with it!
My gallery want's you..
"Things I am not allowed to do at hogwarts: I am not allowed to lock harry and draco in a closet to se if hot gaysex would accure.. cause we all know it would.."
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"Is sloppiness in speech caused by ignorance or apathy? I don't know, and I don't care." -William Safire.
I rage against my username. :iconnotimpressedplz:
true... wow... first deep and now true...
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Just being me.. so live with it!
My gallery want's you..
"Things I am not allowed to do at hogwarts: I am not allowed to lock harry and draco in a closet to se if hot gaysex would accure.. cause we all know it would.."
"To be free-
It’s a common wish
But truth be told, how free are we?
Whether it’s by the state, our parents or just someone
Everyone is owned by something
Freedom is a wonderful concept-
But it doesn’t exist "
their almost interchangeable with commas, but they add a little more umph
going back to the wording, "or just someone" sounds out of place and doesn't agree gramatically with "the state" (not that it's as important in poetry as it is in prose but ehh) I would suggest something that flows more: "Whether it’s by our government, our parents, our friends"
but that's just me.
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Albus Dumbledore is Gay....Siriusly!!!!......XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd
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"Is sloppiness in speech caused by ignorance or apathy? I don't know, and I don't care." -William Safire.
I rage against my username. :iconnotimpressedplz:
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